New deals posted everyday, starting Black Friday and running through the holiday season! No hassles, no lines - just awesome savings on art, deviantWEAR, Premium Memberships and more!

Artist's Comments
IGNORE THE LOOP It's a draft.
Surprise? It's what I've been working on in the past 2 months. Not regularly, of course. I've been busy with school. Take a good look at it, 'cause this'll be a little project I'll be working. To improve effects and skills. And boy, does it need some work. Critique. Critique. Critique. Please. I'm open to any advice. How should the thunder look? Animation, more effects. Anything! And if anyone could show me some lightning techniques and examples I could study would great. Paticularly if their tutorials or pixel art. I know I haven't submitted any full emotes recently. I really want to, but I don't have Fireworks. For the final message... GUESS THE GAME? : D CommentsDude, Its awesome... You amde everything well
-- How to creat emoticons? Need a tutorial? Chek out =Emotication today!!! That is amazing. Really well done
-- Saving the world, one emote at a time. Join *Emoticiety. Now Also, check out =Emotication I think the explosion goes up really quickly, which is good, but then the outline kinda lingers there while it's disappearing (like it's disappearing too slowly) and it looks a little awkward
Also, the lightning looks a tiny bit awkward too, though only right at the bottom, where the lightning hits the ground But everything else looks really good and the details are amazing -- (Click us!)- amazing
-- oasimdotcom is a creative boutique that designs award worthy websites "If there is a will, there is a way!" |
|
Critiques
Thank you for your Critique
You are not logged in.