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IGNORE THE LOOP It's a draft.

Surprise? It's what I've been working on in the past 2 months. Not regularly, of course. I've been busy with school. :shakefist:

Take a good look at it, 'cause this'll be a little project I'll be working. To improve effects and skills. And boy, does it need some work. :no:

Critique. Critique. Critique. Please. I'm open to any advice. How should the thunder look? Animation, more effects. Anything!

And if anyone could show me some lightning techniques and examples I could study would great. Paticularly if their tutorials or pixel art.

I know I haven't submitted any full emotes recently. I really want to, but I don't have Fireworks. :icongrumpinessplz: I hate colouring on photoshop. This makes a lot of shading glitches.

For the final message...

GUESS THE GAME? : D

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:iconsamsite-x:
Awesome mate,

Infamous = awesome game!
:iconasikka:
NOOOOO!!!!!! HE KILLED THE TARD!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT BASTARD!!!!!!!!! :<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<
:iconflanchan:
Looks great so far! It's very smooth. :la:

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:iconwhiim:
Amazing! :iconimhappyplz: I don't really have any advice O-o lol

sowwy

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:iconmaniacalmuffin:
That is incredible :wow:
I think the lightning could use a bit of work though. Maybe if it had more details? I don't know :shrug:

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But sometimes they don't make sense,
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:iconitsme678876:
kinda weird but cool, i do think you can ork more on the lightning and the emotes expression looks mad XD

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:eager: I'm so ready for whatever challenge you have for me. :eager:
:iconroblnhood:
omg the huge white explosion part, theres a whitish line that appears on the left side. :B i dont know if its on purpose or not but it looks out of place.

other than that, its great :eager:
:iconholymane:
we suppa awesome...i really want to play this game, to bad its exclusive for ps3 :<

anyway...i liked the effects, exept the one when the emote glides. it looks a bit lame =\..but the one when he smashes the ground is really awesome!!

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i'm so awesome, that i'm able to glide using toilet paper
:iconkermodog:
Oh shi...

:paranoid:

That's isn't supposed to be there. Glad you noticed it. Some dodgy erasing I think. :B

Thanks!

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Beat this. :|
:iconkermodog:
PS3 is much better than xbox... :no: Why did Xbox have to be made anyways? :B If they hadn't been made, everyone would have a ps3 and no games would be exclusive. They should just combine companies. :paranoid:

Yeah, the loop (the glide part) was just a rush to reccur the emote again. In the final emote, the loop and the jump would be much better. :B

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Beat this. :|

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