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:evillaugh: The new way to get somewhere...
I like ma' explosion. What do you think: does it need more shading, more work, more frames?

This only took me 2 hours and 14 frames.
I think I've got the basics of explosions now. :plotting:
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:iconkermodog:
What second frame are you talking about?

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:iconkermodog:
Thanks! :giggle:

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:iconriuske:
oh nevermind. *sh* :3
:iconattelocin:
I'm thinking more highlights on the gray, actually. I've spent a lot of time just staring at explosion sprites from Megaman Zero :/

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omg :faint: awesomly done :clap::clap::clap::clap::clap: can't stop clapping :p :clap::clap::clap:

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:iconmadb0y:
Awesome!
The idea the animation is awesome..

You should add some shading to the explosion, it will make it better :)
:iconkermodog:
Sounds good! :eager: I'll get working on it.
Thanks again for the tip! :#1:

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Beat this. :|
:iconkermodog:
Thanks! ;)

Let me put a stop to your clapping...
*pulls out axe*

Now if you just put your hands out... :evillaugh:

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Beat this. :|
:iconkermodog:
Yeah, I might add some highlights.
Thanks for the comment!

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:iconsynfull:
Nicely done. Brilliant work on the explosion, though i have a suggestion. I feel that frame 4,5 and 6 need a variation in colour. At the second there is only one colour in each and especially in frame 5 this looks rather weird. It would be better to add (a little) extra colour and blend it down in the colour blocks so it looks a little less like a random block of colour an a little more like awesome explosion clouds. Other than that, it looks great :)

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