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Hopefully an upcoming emote which should be finished soon. Obviously the expressions need work. :XD: This is also my first time using perspective... so I hope it's not too bad. :B

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~shadow-mario-1995 Oct 20, 2009, 2:14:22 AM
Great! The only problem with it really, is when the orange emote turns around, The loop doesnt seem quite right. All Im saying is just make the emote turning around a little bit more smooth by adding just a few mere frames to it..

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=Kermodog Oct 20, 2009, 2:22:10 AM
Well, it's unfinished, so there isn't a loop made for it yet. :XD:

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=MixedMilkChOcOlate Oct 20, 2009, 3:36:10 AM
Nice I like that style :aww:
I hope you will finish it soon :meow:

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=Oktanas Oct 20, 2009, 9:48:23 AM
maybe a bit more dithering on the rocks
and i think the grass could be a bit darker

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~shadow-mario-1995 Oct 20, 2009, 2:13:05 PM
bah, srry i forgot it was a draft :iconohfuckplz:

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=Kermodog Oct 20, 2009, 2:49:54 PM
Thanks. :>

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=Kermodog Oct 20, 2009, 3:00:07 PM
No, to me, I think the rocks look fine. :\ Dithering is only a last resort for shading. :B

But yes, I think the grass could do with some fixing up. :nod:

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=Whiim Oct 21, 2009, 12:25:00 PM
Amazing! The perspective is nice, and his expression is great! :la: Nice job!

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=MenInASuitcase Oct 21, 2009, 10:24:06 PM
great :clap: i think even if it is your first try with perspective it looks already great :)

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